Thursday, October 22, 2009

Yummy Chocolate Paragraphs

All right, Tigers. Click on "Comments" below and add the good copy of your paragraph describing the delicious treat from Tuesday. Please remember to include your FIRST NAME so that I can mark your work.

10 comments:

  1. your paragraph good copy goes here.

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  2. We had a sweet time at school yesterday.The wrapper crinkled when I ripped it open.The brown, square Hershey bar had caramel oozing out of it.The mix of fudge and caramel tickled my nose.The rich fudge and creamy caramel taste so fantastic.I wish I could eat delicious chocolate in class evryday. Nina.

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  3. The choclate was nice and rich the carmel was good it was like a volcano whenit was ozzing out then it made a crunchy and .Nice and brown its says hershey it was. Melting in my fingers it was squishy after that the honey it was delicious carmel ozzing out.

    Robey

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  4. Jaden

    We had a sweet time at school yesterday. The brown square Hershey bar had caramel oozing out The mix of fudge and caramel tickled my nose. The rich creamy sweetness melted in my mouth.The wrapper
    crinkled when I opened it.

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  5. We had a sweet time at school yesterday! The wrapper crinkled when I ripped it open. The brown, square Hershey bar had caramel oozing out when we got to eat chocolate. The mix of fudge and caramel tickled my nose. The creamy, rich sweetness melted in my mouth. I wish I can eat fantastic chocolate everyday.

    Kelsi

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  6. We had a sweet time yesterday when we ate some
    chocolate.The wrapper crinkied when I ripped it
    open.The brown sqrare hersey had caramel oozing
    out of it.The mix of fudge and caramel tickled
    my nose.The creamy rich sweetness melted in my mouth.I wish I couid eat chocolate everyday.

    Mackenzie

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  7. Destiny.

    We had a sweet time yesterday. The wrapper crinkled when I ripped it open. The brown choclate oozed out like a volcano.The rich creamy sweetness melted in my mouth. The mix of fudge and caramel tickled my nose.I WISH WE HAD CHOCOLATE EVERYDAY!

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  8. shakira.

    We had a sweet time at school yesterday.The rapper crinkled when I ripped it open.The brown square hershey bar had caramel oozing out.The mix of fudge and caramel tickeld my fuzzy nose.The rich creamy sweetness caramel melting mouth. I wish I can eat fantastic chocolate everday - a whole bar.

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  9. Iry We had a sweet time at school yesterday.when we got to eat the chocolate. The wapper crinkled when I it opened. The brown square Hershey bar had caramel oozing out.The mix of fudge and caramel tickled my nose. The creamy rich sweetness melted in my mouth. I wish we can have fantastit chocolate every day.

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  10. We had a sweet choclate time at school yesterday. The wraer crinkled l rippd it open the brown square hershey ber had caramel oozng the mix of fubge and caramel tickled my nose. the rich chocolate meited in my mouth. l wish i could have chocolate in class everyday.

    Christian

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